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Strangeleaf's avatar

"The best ponchos are bacon ponchos" is going on the list...

Kind Chicken's avatar

“Your honor… exhibit A. The prosecution rests.” Hahaha

Thorn's avatar

I love how this is written. Thank you!

Kind Chicken's avatar

Appreciate that greatly :)

J. Mira | Nothing Has Changed's avatar

“Then one day it was no longer there. As if the illustrator overseeing my reality had tired of drawing it, and just erased it, not even having the common decency of leaving little red eraser rubbings behind to alert me of the change.”

The whole piece seems to gather around this wonderful line. It makes every other word worth reading. Great.

Kind Chicken's avatar

Hey thanks dude! It was funny, I was sitting there with the memory as I was writing, then began reflecting on the memory itself, and how just one day, it was no longer there, and I didn’t even notice for years, which then led me to think about all the other things that I once treasured until one day I didn’t. You know what I mean? Casualties of growing up I guess.

J. Mira | Nothing Has Changed's avatar

Yes, I know exactly what you mean. Some things disappear so quietly that we only realize years later they mattered. “Casualties of growing up” is a great way to put it